Utkar22 wrote:
Look at it, Tris was doing the same thing as David.
Exactly and it's funny how she can up with this dumb plan anyways. People are going to wipe the memories of the people YOU care about so instead of trying to shut the machine down, or threatening David, they send someone in a sucide mission to erase the memories of people YOU don't care about to save the people YOU want to save. If David was going to kill someone she cared about and she killed him that would have been better but really, she chose to erase people's minds to. When I read that they were going to stop the memory I thought they were just going to shut it down or blow it up because that was the 1st thing I would have done if I was in her place. When I read the part about Caleb going I knew Tris was going to do something to change that but it's funny how no one else knew that. Let's be honest here the only time Tris really thought of others in the book was when she went into the weapons room instead of Caleb even when she was dying she never fought to keep herself alive for her friends she just asked I'm I done yet and her mom was encouraging her to die WTF. If I was Tris mom I would have slapped her because it would it be better if she stays alive help others, those people help more people and eventually things will get better instead of dying and no one except the few left alive knows about her death and can't really look up to her because no one really knew her. It gets me mad that people say that this book is "PERFECT". Thats some major BS right there!!! You can give this book a 4/5, 1/5, -1000/5 but not a 5/5. It would get %100 if it was written without any flaws, major plot holes, etc. I don't care if anyone loves it or hates it no one should say it's "PERFECT" because believe or not it's not even close to perfect.
What I Hated
Everything after they left the city
All the characters (not much left alive anyways). They all acted differently and a lot of the bad people got a free pass
What I liked
The fact that Tris went into the weapons room and nothing else after she survived the death serum
The make out scences (probably the only scenes with action, beside the vet beginning and the crappy ending
Tobias' grief then sort of moving on (the only time in this book where he didn't act like a wimp)
What she could of done to make it better
CHANGE EVERYTHING!!!
I'll be more specific. SOME things are:
Making the outside cool not another Chicago with a different name
Have Caleb's POV (the last book is about Tris and Caleb not Four)
Everyone knowing about Tris' death so that they can actually change
Tris going down like a hero not like a pig getting slaughtered to become a hamburger that no one really cares about except non-meat eaters
Do something interesting with the side characters
Have Tobias leave the city to change the world (something that Tris obviously wanted but no one did)
Not letting Evelyn win
Letting Peter suck it up and live with a Stiff dying to save everyone
Keeping Jeanine and Eric alive (it would have been so suspenseful if all 3 badies worked together
Not killing off Tori but keeping her in the city to fight
Adding more action
Going more deep into the whole Nita and Tris problem (it would be great to see Tobias fight for Tris again)
Tobias not giving up a life of being awesome for working in an office
Tobias being the leader
Tobias not being so wimpy in this book ➡
Me:you're damaged
Old Tobias *gets his knives*
Allegiant Tobias *walks around feeling sorry for himself*
Keeping Tris body (he can't really remember her face forever so it would be nice if he visited her once in a while and nobody say I'm wrong because it's hard to remember someones face from a long time ago)
Adding alot more action
Tris meeting the president( if they have one) or something like that
Have the time span years instead of a couple months (yeah it's so believable that a 16ryrs girl learn the true meaning of selflessness in a couple of months where as people in Abnegation take years to learn that)
Make Tris 18 instead of 16 because it makes me think that I could be in her place in a several months
So that was a "few" to name but trust there is alot more
Now you have reached the end of my rant which I was hoping that it wouldn't be one because I was just reply to the person who replied to my comment earlier. Anyways have a good day and dont be a pansycake 😆😊 (only true divergent fans would understand the last sentence)😊